WALT write in first person.
A day in a life of a cheetah.
I woke up just as the sun started to rise. I felt like I need to get exercise. I was so hungry that I got up to go hunting. I’m a carnivore so i had to find so meat to eat, so I caught a springbok by chasing it. I am the fastest animal in the world. I can run 80 to 130 km/h. After that, I licked my yellow fur with black spots clean. I like to hunt in the day to avoid other animals. I eat my food in a tree so lions can't steal it. I am really good at climbing! I’m a female so I give birth to 2 to 8 babies in a lifetime.
Ello,ello,there Izzy.
ReplyDeleteI like it that you said in it that your a femeal.
But next time add a that your faster than any other land animal.
Ka,pi!
Hi Izzy
ReplyDeleteI like your facts about cheetahs.I didn´t know the cheetah was the fastest animal in the world. Is the cheetah your favourite animal? From Charlie
yes a cheetah is my favourite animal
DeleteEllo,ello,there Izzy.
ReplyDeleteI like it that you said in it that your a femeal.
But next time add a that your faster than any other land animal.
Ka,pi!My mum might bring my dog to the beach clean up today!
Kia Ora Izzy Riley here from Rawhiti school. It's great you knew how to put the facts together. I really like they way you make it good like for each part of the day it fits it very well it goes like the life a of a cheetah. If you edit the post make the sentences a little longer cause there really quick.
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