WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.
When I got to the pool I was in my togs. I looked at the hydro-slide and I asked him if we could go on the hydro-slide. He said yes! I was scared and excited. When we got to the counter we got our bands on to say we can go on the hydro-slide. I got my doughnut with dad and we got in it and went down the hydro-slide. It was so much fun! All I could see was pitch black! I did it over and over. After 45 minutes. I went home.
