Friday, 23 October 2020

A moment in time at the swimming pool.

 WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.


When I got to the pool I was in my togs. I looked at the hydro-slide and I asked him if we could go on the hydro-slide. He said yes! I was scared and excited. When we got to the counter we got our bands on to say we can go on the hydro-slide. I got my doughnut with dad and we got in it and went down the hydro-slide. It was so much fun! All I could see was pitch black! I did it over and over. After 45 minutes. I went home.

  



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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous2 November 2020 at 11:30

    Hi Izzy. I really loved your moment in time At The Swimming Pool. Next time you could remove they dash and replace it for a space in hydro slide.

    Thanks
    Emilee

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