Today is my birthday I have two friends over for the night Eva and Sophie.
Its going to be a blast for my cake it was a chocolate mud cake it was amazing. I loved it.
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Today is my birthday I have two friends over for the night Eva and Sophie.
Its going to be a blast for my cake it was a chocolate mud cake it was amazing. I loved it.
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Kia Ora Izzy!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lily-Rose and I am from New Brighton Catholic School.
Your birthday sound like it was super fun!
I LOVE chocolate mud cake so that cake sounds DELICIOUS!
Next time for your blog post you could add more to your post and tell me more about what happened at your birthday party.
What was your favourite part about the party?
The cake
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