Friday, 24 April 2020
Once upon a time there was a sloth and his name was fire. Because he was as warm as fire he is fantastic at climbing trees with his cousin pearl because she was as shiny as a pearl. Fire was one years old and pearl was tow years old. there favourite food was berries there favourite drink was water. One day thy came to climb a tree but the tree had a x on it thy did't no what that meant. they climb it then the people then they went to another tree. and went home
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Hi Izzy
ReplyDeleteWhat another great imaginative story. Make sure you check your punctuation before posting your story. I like the names you are choosing for your characters....how did you come up with those names?
Sarah