Once upon a time there was a princess her name was Alex she loved nature because she lived in a forest in a small house. She had animal friends one of them was a dear.Her favourite food was watermelon and her favourite drink was lemonade she had a little sister was three years old and Alex loved going on walks every day with her little sister. They had fun climbing trees it was a foggy day when she went to play with her animal friends. then she came across from a hungry bear the bear tried to eat her but she had invisibility when the bear tried to eat her she turned invisible and the bear didn't eat her. Alex when't home to her little sister and her name was Andre. But Andre was in't home Alex look'd everywhere but the forest she when't into the forest. She found her little sister in the tree picking blackberries. they when't home.
Thursday, 23 April 2020
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Hi Izzy
ReplyDeleteYAY! You have posted your first blog! What a great story about Princess Alex, I enjoyed reading it. Next time you could add more adjectives (describing words) to your story....adjectives will allow the reader to be able to imagine what the characters and setting would look like. Well done on posting your first blog, I'm looking forward to reading more of your blogs.
Sarah