Thursday, 7 May 2020

the girl and her hoers

Once upon a time there was a girl her name was star she loved her hoes night they loved going for rids to the forest. But one morning night was gone star looked in the paddock and the shed in the backyard the driveway and the park. But had´t found  night  she had to find night  she went in the deep dark forest on her own. Could she find night by the end of the day she still had´t found night. And went to sleep thinking about night. the next morning night was in the paddock
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3 comments:

  1. Sarah8 May 2020 at 09:28

    Hi Izzy
    Well done on writing another wonderful story. It must have been very upsetting for Star not to be able to find her horse Night! Next time make sure you use capital letters for the names in your story. I'm wondering if there is going to be another chapter in this story....I'd love to read it.
    Sarah

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  2. Anonymous8 May 2020 at 14:43

    Hi Izzy Emilee here want to say great story and I miss u

    Emilee

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  3. Anonymous29 June 2020 at 17:34

    thank you emilee

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